Peer Review on Paper Two

In the class we went over our discovery drafts with a peer.  Alex helped me and guided me in a better direction to follow the assignment and have a purpose to my essay.  I will be analyzing Woodstock through a poster, the movie and newspaper articles about the three day festival in Woodstock, New York.  I will apprpoach this topic by giving a background of Woodstock, the overall message of the festival and how it affected people and how they viewed the world.  I chose this because music is a huge part of my life and music always has a message in it and during Woodstock music was a way people escaped reality.  Today there are still music festival that are three days long or even a week long.  I will also compare and contrast the ideas that the visual and text implies and how they were portrayed.  My peer asked how I felt about my topic and how will I analyze the visual and textual evidence in Woodstock.